this is my narrative
A strange thing happened on my way to school today
As i was walking to school a weird glowing crack appeared in front of me making strange noises,
curious i jumped in. SNAP WHOOSH THUD! My feet hit concrete and i had a shaft of metal in my hand.
HOOT HOOT HOOT! Next thing i know i'm in a bus with a bunch of other people, in a snap i realise my
dream had come true because I WAS IN FORTNITE!
After realising this i ran to the door and leapt out angling my body down for a while. After what was about
ten seconds i groped in my pocket for a
small disc “Gotcha” i triumphantly cry and throw the disc out in front of me.
curious i jumped in. SNAP WHOOSH THUD! My feet hit concrete and i had a shaft of metal in my hand.
HOOT HOOT HOOT! Next thing i know i'm in a bus with a bunch of other people, in a snap i realise my
dream had come true because I WAS IN FORTNITE!
After realising this i ran to the door and leapt out angling my body down for a while. After what was about
ten seconds i groped in my pocket for a
small disc “Gotcha” i triumphantly cry and throw the disc out in front of me.
As the disc spins i hear a supercar speeding up and the glider pops out in front of me so i grab the handles
and glide safely to a building where my blinged out pickaxe magically pops into my hands
“what wha- ok so i am Mission Specialist but what is my back bling?” i look at my back and realise i got
the Dark Void back bling but, first things first i need to loot up!
and glide safely to a building where my blinged out pickaxe magically pops into my hands
“what wha- ok so i am Mission Specialist but what is my back bling?” i look at my back and realise i got
the Dark Void back bling but, first things first i need to loot up!
About 2 minutes later i was loaded with supplies and weapons.
As i was running i heard footsteps so i quickly swung myself and my m16 around.
As i surveyed the area there was nothing of interest except a suspicious bush so i aimed my m16 at the bush
and loaded it and the player wearing it with medium ammo.
As i was running i heard footsteps so i quickly swung myself and my m16 around.
As i surveyed the area there was nothing of interest except a suspicious bush so i aimed my m16 at the bush
and loaded it and the player wearing it with medium ammo.
9 and a half minutes later i had finished off all the players i met except one.
I nearly jumped out of my skin when i saw him idly standing next to me…
SNAP i quickly dispatched him with a round from my Deagle and won the match
WHOOSH THUD my feet hit the concrete of the school bike rack area and i walked into school
feeling a weight in my pocket.
SNAP i quickly dispatched him with a round from my Deagle and won the match
WHOOSH THUD my feet hit the concrete of the school bike rack area and i walked into school
feeling a weight in my pocket.
Good job Joshua. your story is well made and makes sense (in fortnite)
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Nice work Joshua next time remember to put caps on I.I like how you show much information and detail
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